My writing essay for, NO UNFAIR DETAINMENT!!

                                            No Unfair Detainment!                          “I believe that people can speak for themselves and not just be detained.”Because people are allowed to speak for themselves before they are detained.One Day I came home and suddenly my dad grounded me for no reason and that day I came back from a dinner with my cousins and sister and didn’t really give me and my sister a reason why he grounded us, and being grounded is like jail to me.
      I believe from human rights that there should be no one detained without a reason or let them speak at least for themselves, because they get sad and confused, and maybe they did something for a reason but they can’t speak and they don’t have the voice because nobody actually follows human rights so make the human rights true and read along this book.
     One reason is that they feel sad, confused, and lonely. For example, pretend your in prison right now and have no idea why they put you in prison, how would you feel? Probably sad lonely or confused right? So that’s why you shouldn’t just be put in prison like that.

Also, you can’t just put someone in jail like that with no reason, like what if they are innocent and not supposed to be in jail and have been mistaken but other people don’t know because you can’t speak for yourself.

 

    Another reason, is that they can speak for themselves so why can’t they? I have an answer to that,and it is because for example,the people who detain them won’t let them speak because they think there really guilty, and they think they will make up fake stories about why, but the stories might be true, so just let them speak once and see if you think it’s true, don’t just detain them and let them be sad, tell them what they did and let them see if they’re the ones who did it.
     And finally, by the way I got this from an article from newsela,okay back to the example,they might have done something bad for good, like for example, there is a man from Mexico had been sentenced to jail for 22 years because he shot his neighbor, before you say that he should deserve jail but he actually did it for self defence and nobody would believe him because they didn’t let him talk, so now he has to go to jail for 22 years for doing nothing, but the guy after 9 years got to speak for himself and he got free early, after 10 years of prison he got to speak on the 9th year and got free on the 10th because of his supporters. But it’s SO UNFAIR!! Cause he got imprisoned for self defence.
     That’s why NO UNFAIR DETAINMENT!!!, they get sad and confused and don’t know what they did wrong that shouldn’t happen, tell them what they did and see if they’re guilty or not, let’s make the human rights real and not just a writing on a piece of paper.

2 thoughts on “My writing essay for, NO UNFAIR DETAINMENT!!

  1. I like how you said this statement
    For example, pretend your in prison right now and have no idea why they put you in prison, how would you feel? Probably sad lonely or confused right? So that’s why you shouldn’t just be put in prison like that.
    This really gets me thinking.

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